“Musashi-san” by Jack Vian
June 18, 2015
Jack Vian
MUSASHI-SAN Haibun Who are the ones who awake without hearing the sound of the sun-filled clouds dancing upon the edges of an outstretched wing? And who am I? To stand alone like a swordsman without his sword, a mere figure in the unresolved distance like a brushstroke awaiting a scroll— an empty bowl ungrateful for the pleasure of its emptiness —from Rattle #47, Spring 2015 Tribute to Japanese Forms 2016 Neil Postman Award Winner __________ Jack Vian: “For the incarcerated poet, a poem is more than just a literary construct, it is an ideal given flesh. It’s the difference in wishing that a passing plane will notice the ship-wrecked castaways, and taking the time to carve an SOS in the beach or put a message in a bottle. So I’m always thankful when readers find something worthwhile in my experience. The only Japanese form that I use regularly is the haiku, and my practice of that had fallen into arrears. But I wrote this highly versified almost-haibun while reading a biography of Miyamoto Musashi.”
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Thank you, Maggie. This is truly wonderful!
Love the ending!
a brushstroke
awaiting a scroll—
an empty bowl
ungrateful for the pleasure
of its emptiness
- Tom
Thanks for sharing Maggie. Maybe we could use this thread to share other poems we come across from time to time, for other members to enjoy. What do you think?